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Just One Chance

Re: Just One Chance

Hey Lillimaus *bussi*

Wusstest du eigentlich, dass ich auch Lilie (aber mit "e" *g*) heiße? Hab den Namen von ner ganz lieben Freundin abbekommen

Ich hab nun auch deine Fic gelesen und muss sagen, dass sie mir im Großen und Ganzen schon gefällt. Die Idee an sich ist interessant und vielversprechend, nur fehlt es mir ein wenig an Dialogen *seufz* Ich weiß, ich kritisiere das immer und überall, aber beim Lesen brauch ich einfach Umgebungsbeschreibungen, Gedanken und Gefühle, Gesichtsausdrücke usw. Aber ich bin mir sicher, das kriegst du auch noch hin *zwinker*


Bussi,
Nora



“Do you have any idea what it felt like to see you with her? That you would, behind my back—“ - Buffy
“Buffy, this wasn't about you! This was about saving someone's soul. That's what I do here and you're not a part of it. That was your idea, remember. We stay away from each other.” - Angel
“I came because you were in danger.” - Buffy
“I'm in danger every day. You came because of Faith. You were looking for vengeance.” - Angel
“I got a right to it.” - Buffy
“Not in my city.” - Angel
“You know, I have someone in my life now. That I love. It's not what we had, it's very new. You know what makes it new? I trust him. I know him.” - Buffy
“That's great. That's nice. You've moved on. I can't. You've found someone new. I'm not allowed to. Remember? I see you again it cuts me up inside and the person I share that with is me. You don't know me anymore so don't come down here with your great new life and expect me to do things your way. Go home.” - Angel
“See? Faith wins again.” - Buffy
“Go.” - Angel

Re: Just One Chance

Du meinst, dir sind es zu viele Dialoge? Weil sonst macht das nämlich keinen Sinn, was du geschrieben hast
Keine Angst, das kommt auch noch alles, das is ja absicht, dass erst mal bissl geredet wird etc. Ich wechsel das halt immer ab.

Angel: I can stay in town as long as you want me.
Buffy: How's forever? Does forever work for you?
Buffy & Angel forever!

Re: Just One Chance

Nein!! Genau das Gegenteil. Ich sagte ja, mir fehlen die Dialoge, das bedeutet ich hätt gern welche, aber es sind keine da

Bussi,
deine Nora



“Do you have any idea what it felt like to see you with her? That you would, behind my back—“ - Buffy
“Buffy, this wasn't about you! This was about saving someone's soul. That's what I do here and you're not a part of it. That was your idea, remember. We stay away from each other.” - Angel
“I came because you were in danger.” - Buffy
“I'm in danger every day. You came because of Faith. You were looking for vengeance.” - Angel
“I got a right to it.” - Buffy
“Not in my city.” - Angel
“You know, I have someone in my life now. That I love. It's not what we had, it's very new. You know what makes it new? I trust him. I know him.” - Buffy
“That's great. That's nice. You've moved on. I can't. You've found someone new. I'm not allowed to. Remember? I see you again it cuts me up inside and the person I share that with is me. You don't know me anymore so don't come down here with your great new life and expect me to do things your way. Go home.” - Angel
“See? Faith wins again.” - Buffy
“Go.” - Angel